Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these viewpoints and give your own opinion.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to complain about
garbage
piles in our area. My name is Hardeep Singh and I am living in the Circle town area. My neighbours are very disappointed due to the huge amount of
garbage
on our street.As we know that all
garbage
collecting company workers are on strike because of their payment issue ,
hence
all community members are facing
this
problem.
Moreover
, most people are worrying because
this
biodegradable material invites a huge amount of insects that cause serious diseases like Malaria , cholera and many more.
Secondly
,
this
garbage
creates an unhealthy type of smell in the environment , owing to
this
people are facing breathing problems.
Finally
, all residents need a solution for
this
hard time and we recommend that if your organization will give a contract to another company or solve an issue of the previous company
then
it will be easier to spend living here. I hope you will take prompt action on
this
issue. Yours faithfully, Hardeep Singh
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