You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to a retailer to complain in the letter Explain why you are unhappy Request a refund Make arrangement to return the damaged item.

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Dear Sir, Greetings My name is Tejas Darji and I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have ordered the trending digital gismos watch through the Amazon website. To my surprise, I received it today in physically damaged condition, and highly discontent with your services.

Firstly

, I was fascinated while I saw a digital watch with the latest features at a reasonable price, I purchased it instantly.

Also

, when I received the courier today, I was excited to open it. But to my dismay, the watch screen was broken and my all enthusiasm

gone

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in vain and made me upset.

Besides

, I would appeal to you to reverse the payment which I already paid online for

this

product. I had taken several photos and videos for precise details. I have purchased a new small empty box along with shock absorber materials to pack the received broken watch to return it. I will share the tracking details with photos and videos. I request you to acknowledge it once you received it from your end. I hope to receive the refund as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Tejas Darji

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