You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to a retailer to complain in the letter Explain why you are unhappy Request a refund Make arrangement to return the damaged item.

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Dear Sir, Greetings My name is Tejas Darji and I am writing

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letter to inform you that I have ordered the trending digital gismos watch through the Amazon website. To my surprise, I received it today in physically damaged condition, and highly discontent with your services.

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, I was fascinated while I saw a digital watch with the latest features at a reasonable price, I purchased it instantly.

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, when I received the courier today, I was excited to open it. But to my dismay, the watch screen was broken and my all enthusiasm

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in vain and made me upset.

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, I would appeal to you to reverse the payment which I already paid online for

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product. I had taken several photos and videos for precise details. I have purchased a new small empty box along with shock absorber materials to pack the received broken watch to return it. I will share the tracking details with photos and videos. I request you to acknowledge it once you received it from your end. I hope to receive the refund as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Tejas Darji

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

189 words

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You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to a retailer to complain in the letter Explain why you are unhappy Request a refund Make arrangement to return the damaged item.

You are going abroad on holiday and your friend will stay in your home while you are away. write a letter to your friend, in your letter : a. explain where you hide the keys b. describe what your friend needs to do in your absance c. say when you are coming back

In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

With the advent of social media, more people are getting their news online instead of from print media. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for people who read news online.

why people must be more sensetive about environment and sonsider pollution effects