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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, in many countries, there are many
people
 with
a
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high qualified graduation without a
job
. I totally agree with
this
 opinion,
however
, sometimes, those
people
 should have
a
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employment, but, usually, it is not a good one or not congruent with their studies. In my opinion,
this
 situation was created by the development and
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modern society, indeed in the past
people
 were able to find a
job
 without a degree. In
this
 age, rather,
companies
 use to request a degree
also
 for a basic or manual
job
. Due to
this
 behaviour, many guys decide to start a difficult and expensive study path,
instead
 of
get
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a
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immediate manual employment.
For example
, the majority of my peers decide to attend a professional education,
such
 as beauticians or cooks, but
then
 they try to continue their study with specific courses. From my point of view,
firstly
 should
companies
 introduce
job
 experiences for graduated students, but they
also
 have to pay them, because, in
this
 days,
companies
 use to take advantage of graduated
people
 with awful terminals contracts.
Furthermore
, some of them should accept
also
 passable jobs, just to have some concrete experience.
In addition
,
also
 state should improve the partnership between
companies
 and
people
, maybe it can give some capitals. To sum up, the solution for
this
 bad situation is a collaboration between
companies
, graduated
people
 and countries.
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