The diagrams show how the bee makes honey and the stages in the production of honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the seven most important stages in the
honey making
process of bees. Add a hyphen
honey-making
This
process begins with the honey
bee building a hive
, and then
ends when the honey
is ready for collection and use.
First, the bees have to build a hive
. This
is called a honey
container. Next
, the bees leave the hive
in search of flowers. When they find a suitable flower, they collect nectar
from it, which is used to make honey
.
The nectar
is then
returned to the hive
, where production can begin. First, it is put into cells. After that, the nectar
must be cooled. To do this
, the bee uses its wings to fan the nectar
-filled cells in the hive
. As a result
, the nectar
evaporates leading to a loss of water content and as a final step, honey
is produced.
All in all, there are 7 processes to make honey
ready for human use.Submitted by Eteacher
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