The diagrams show how the bee makes honey and the stages in the production of honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams show how the bee makes honey and the stages in the production of honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the seven most important stages in the
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honey making
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process of bees.
This
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process begins with the
honey
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bee building a
hive
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, and
then
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ends when the
honey
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is ready for collection and use. First, the bees have to build a
hive
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.
This
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is called a
honey
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container.
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, the bees leave the
hive
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in search of flowers. When they find a suitable flower, they collect
nectar
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from it, which is used to make
honey
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. The
nectar
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is
then
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returned to the
hive
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, where production can begin. First, it is put into cells. After that, the
nectar
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must be cooled. To do
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, the bee uses its wings to fan the
nectar
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-filled cells in the
hive
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.
As a result
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, the
nectar
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evaporates leading to a loss of water content and as a final step,
honey
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is produced. All in all, there are 7 processes to make
honey
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ready for human use.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, hive, nectar with synonyms.
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