The diagrams show how the bee makes honey and the stages in the production of honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the seven most important stages in the
Use synonyms
honey making
process of bees. Add a hyphen
honey-making
This
process begins with the Linking Words
honey
bee building a Use synonyms
hive
, and Use synonyms
then
ends when the Linking Words
honey
is ready for collection and use.
First, the bees have to build a Use synonyms
hive
. Use synonyms
This
is called a Linking Words
honey
container. Use synonyms
Next
, the bees leave the Linking Words
hive
in search of flowers. When they find a suitable flower, they collect Use synonyms
nectar
from it, which is used to make Use synonyms
honey
.
The Use synonyms
nectar
is Use synonyms
then
returned to the Linking Words
hive
, where production can begin. First, it is put into cells. After that, the Use synonyms
nectar
must be cooled. To do Use synonyms
this
, the bee uses its wings to fan the Linking Words
nectar
-filled cells in the Use synonyms
hive
. Use synonyms
As a result
, the Linking Words
nectar
evaporates leading to a loss of water content and as a final step, Use synonyms
honey
is produced.
All in all, there are 7 processes to make Use synonyms
honey
ready for human use.Use synonyms
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