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The given bar chart compares

British

people's emigration in

Australia

Spain

, ‎New

Zealand

, the

USA

, and

France

for four years. Overall,

Australia

was the most popular emigration destination for

British

‎citizens. The data was taken from the International Passenger Survey/ ONS ‎source. ‎ According to the bar graph, more than 40

thousand

British

migrated to

Australia

‎in 2004 while

this

number

Spain

was just below 35

thousand

. In

this

year

's ‎

British

migration in New

Zealand

, the

USA

and

France

were about 22, 24, and 21 ‎

thousand

consecutively. The

year

the

British

preferred

France

for migration, ‎where more than 32

thousand

British

went. As it can be observed,

Australia

remained the most popular migration place for ‎

British

people in

this

year

while

this

number

slightly decreased for New

Zealand

‎and the

USA

. In 2006, the

number

British

migrants in

Australia

increased ‎significantly, reaching over 50

thousand

while it decreased slightly in

Spain

, New ‎

Zealand

, and

France

than

last

year

. In the

USA

this

number

increased to about 24 ‎

thousand

while it was lowest in New

Zealand

(21

thousand

).In 2007, more than ‎‎40

thousand

British

migrated to

Australia

while just over 30

thousand

migrated ‎to

Spain

. In the other three countries,

this

number

was from 21 to 27

thousand

.‎

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