shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different ‎educational settings in the UK in 2010.‎

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The given bar chart compares
British
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people's emigration in
Australia
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,
Spain
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, ‎New
Zealand
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, the
USA
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, and
France
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for four years. Overall,
Australia
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was the most popular emigration destination for
British
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‎citizens. The data was taken from the International Passenger Survey/ ONS ‎source. ‎ According to the bar graph, more than 40
thousand
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British
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migrated to
Australia
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‎in 2004 while
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number
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in
Spain
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was just below 35
thousand
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. In
this
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year
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's ‎
British
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migration in New
Zealand
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, the
USA
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and
France
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were about 22, 24, and 21 ‎
thousand
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consecutively. The
next
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year
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the
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preferred
France
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for migration, ‎where more than 32
thousand
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British
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went. As it can be observed,
Australia
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remained the most popular migration place for ‎
British
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people in
this
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year
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while
this
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number
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slightly decreased for New
Zealand
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‎and the
USA
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. In 2006, the
number
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of
British
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migrants in
Australia
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increased ‎significantly, reaching over 50
thousand
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while it decreased slightly in
Spain
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, New ‎
Zealand
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, and
France
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than
last
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year
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. In the
USA
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this
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number
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increased to about 24 ‎
thousand
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while it was lowest in New
Zealand
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(21
thousand
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).In 2007, more than ‎‎40
thousand
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British
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migrated to
Australia
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while just over 30
thousand
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migrated ‎to
Spain
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. In the other three countries,
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number
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was from 21 to 27
thousand
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.‎
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