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The given line graph reports the
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of
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in Dubai over a twelve-month period,starting from January in the year 2002.
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, the graph reveals
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in the months of July and September. As can be seen from the graph the Dubai
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market recorded the
sales
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of
gold
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in a range between 120m
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and 350m
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in 2002.when the
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opened in January,they were reported to be at 200m
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,which
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grew slightly at
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and dramatically later to peak at 350m
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in March.Following March though,the
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witnessed a slump with a relatively steady decline seen for over the following four months until July when the cumulative consumption came down to one of the two
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lows at about 120m
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.
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the
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were seen to fluctuate later with brief rise-and-fall until October,they
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remained relatively stable at a little under 200m
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in the following months. All in all, the 2002 Dubai
gold
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sales
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witnessed an erratic trend across the year with varied patterns of
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being recorded for different quarters growth in the
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a persistent decline in the
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and beyond,and relative stasis in the
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one where the
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converged at
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value.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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