You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter, tell them why you need to move the interview time ask to change the interview date explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job

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Dear Mr Patel, I am writing a letter to you about changing my

interview

date.I know, we had a precious conversation between us for the

interview

schedule.I apologise that I was could not come.

Furthermore

, I humbly request to you reschedule my

interview

date because I was coming to a company at the time, suddenly I fell in sick and I went to doctor my check-up and he said you need some days rest.I would say please arrange a date in

week maybe 24th June it will be better for me if you could do.

In addition

, I fully prepare for an

interview

and ,

still

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I am willing to working for your company. I have a good quality of responsibility, communication

skill

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and team leader , so that's why I think I am perfect for your company employer. Thank you for giving the matter of attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours Sincerely, Rinkal Patel

Submitted by Rinks on Mon Jun 14 2021

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