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You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
 letter in connection with my recent stay at Park View Hotel
room
 no.205, India. Unfortunately, the air conditioner was not working in the
room
. I spent the most miserable 3 days staying in your hotel. Since it is summer the temperature is around 45 degrees out so, it is boiling hot in the
room
. I was able to switch on the AC but there was no cooling and it is very hard for me to manage with a single fan.
Moreover
, It is a closed
room
 without any open windows or
balcony
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. I got suffocation. As I am suffering from
this
 problem, I have called the reception and asked them to either repair the AC or change my
room
 to a proper condition
room
. They assured me that they will fix the issue as soon as possible.
However
, none of them helped me. I want you to verify the
room
 condition before allocating
to
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 the customer.
In addition
 to
this
, I would like you to give me a discount for future bookings or refund 30% of the price that I paid while booking the
room
. Yours faithfully, Rachel Green
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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