You live in a small university town. Last week, you drove to a big city about two hours away to buy a new laptop at a good price. You worked on the laptop all week and finished writing a long assignment that is due shortly. However, this week, the laptop doesn't even switch on. Write to the store. In your letter: tell the store where you live & what happened explain the problem with the laptop state what action you would like the store to take

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to show my disappointment regarding the faulty
laptop
which I purchased from your store
last
week. My name is Nikita, and I live at 73 West Gate ,which is more than 50
kilometers
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far away from your place .One of my friends has recommended
this
which made me drive so long. On 23th May , Tuesday, I visited your showroom and bought
a
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HP
Laptop
serial number WE432789 and made the payment by credit card , the invoice number is NB23456.Only a week passed and the
laptop
started giving me trouble. Let me elaborate on the problem. I had been working on the
laptop
till
last
night and the following morning when I opened the
laptop
and pushed on the power button to switch on it, I found that it was not working
then
I plugged in the charging cable and waited for
sometime
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but it did not turn.
Moreover
, the screen was blank. I am displeased with the quality of the product and request you to replace the
laptop
or send any technician to check the issue.
This
has to be fixed within a day ,as my important project is saved in its drive . I am hoping to hear from you at the earliest. Yours Faithfully Nikita
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