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Popular hobbies and interest change over time and are a reflection of fashion and trends, not indicators of what people actually want to do in their free time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some
people
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 keep changing their regular
hobbies
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 and
interest
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 over
time
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 according to the latest fashion and trends, and
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 is not indicating what they love to do during leisure
time
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. In the modern world, many
people
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 have started doing different kinds of
activities
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 that were not done earlier by them. While I do agree that some
people
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 often changing their
interest
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 and start new
activities
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 in free-
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, others are continuing to do what they love. On the one hand, some
people
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 believe that it is highly important to cope up with the latest trends and fashion to mingle and socialize with close friends and relatives. The reason behind
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 change is, especially young
people
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 would love to wear latest trendy clothes and enjoy their spare
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 to try out with new
hobbies
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 that make them happy for some
time
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.
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 to
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, if they do not update themselves according to the recent trends, they feel quite unhappy and lonely.
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, more and more new fashion designer clothes have introduced to attract the youngsters that show the change in
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 and
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.
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, even though many new
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 have been followed by the young generation, some
people
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 still love to continue with their existing
interest
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 and leisure
time
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 on their own.
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, playing cricket game by
people
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 over 40 years. These
people
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 have been started playing cricket since their childhood and are continue even after many years without changing their mind.
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, not everyone focuses on other sports and change
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 over a while. In conclusion,
although
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 some
people
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 have been changing their free
time
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activities
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 and focus on other areas of
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 to mingle with other
people
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, still a lot of
people
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 stick to their old
hobbies
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 that are being carried forward from childhood. It is advisable to choose the leisure
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activities
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 that gives happiness and to improve physical fitness.
Submitted by Vijay Pandurangan on

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