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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

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governments are better to spend money on public services rather than
irrelavent
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irrelevant
 things
such
 as art. I find myself totally agreeing with the given statement. My main reason
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 believing so is rooted in the definitions of
government
 and what is expected from them. the governing body of each country must look after its own
people
 and fulfilling their needs in the following order : safety, welfare and equality. having these in mind,
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 are a lot to be done for the
people
 who have certain expectations.
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 it is safe to say there is always room for progress and the
government
 has its hand full
acheiving
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achieving
 these goals. By
this
 logic, I do not consider arts the right subject for any
government
 to focus on.
In addition
, arts are more related to each individuals creativity. Meaning individuals are the source and target of it. In a more complete sense, there is no need for the interference of the public sector for arts to strive, because it can look after itself by
people
 who are considered critics, artists, viewer and so on. We have
this
 society
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which
 can survive no matter
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 help of the
government
. So why not invest money on issues that would prove essential to
people
? In conclusion, I believe that governments must avoid taking part in irrelevant issues
such
 as art and try to attain better results in public services offered to their
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural enrichment
  • expression of creativity
  • promote diversity
  • enhance social cohesion
  • boost tourism
  • job creation
  • stimulate economic growth
  • improve quality of life
  • essential services
  • maintenance and development
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