Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that

men

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and

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have different characteristics and abilities and

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stigmatized that they have different occupation segregation. Though

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and

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have different

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and perform differently

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I believe that both sexes can perform the same

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same

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the same

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capacity and bring the same outcome. In

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essay, I will explain my disagreement below. In every

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there is

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gender

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differences

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which

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creates different

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roles.

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women

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are considered best suited for caring jobs

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as teacher and nurse.

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females

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are

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given

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offers in reception and advertising roles in various beauty products considering

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are more beautiful and should be given feminine roles in

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job

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market.

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, these are only the

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stereotype and should be eradicated from

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society.

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, many

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are

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carrying out

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high level

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decision making role in various organizations like

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are

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police

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the police

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, army and in

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field which

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mostly

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dominant

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male

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the male

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females

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are

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contributing their role in public space.

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now a days

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women

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are in politics and raising their voice for

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gender

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equality.

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women

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are equally representing in the political space and working with the

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together.

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, the president of Nepal is a female and so with the other countries like Finland and Bangladesh. In conclusion, though male and

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have different nature and different way of performing

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work

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work

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, I disagree that

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and

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should have

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separation. When

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are

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given the opportunity and capacity development, they can

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do their

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perfectly in the

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domain of

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, we should not differentiate the

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on the basis of sex.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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