Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that
men
and
women
have different characteristics and abilities and
hence
stigmatized that they have different occupation segregation. Though
men
and
women
have different
behavior
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and perform differently
but
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I believe that both sexes can perform the same
job
in
same
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capacity and bring the same outcome. In
this
essay, I will explain my disagreement below. In every
society
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there is
a
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gender
differences
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which
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that
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creates different
gender
roles.
For example
,
women
are considered best suited for caring jobs
such
as teacher and nurse.
In addition
,
females
are
also
given
the
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job
offers in reception and advertising roles in various beauty products considering
females
are more beautiful and should be given feminine roles in
job
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market.
However
, these are only the
gender
stereotype and should be eradicated from
the
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society.
For instance
, many
women
are
also
carrying out
the
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high level
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decision making role in various organizations like
men
.
Women
are
also
in
police
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the police
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, army and in
medical
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field which
are
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mostly
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dominant
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dominated
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by
male
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the male
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.
Furthermore
,
females
are
also
contributing their role in public space.
For example
,
now a days
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more
women
are in politics and raising their voice for
the
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gender
equality.
Moreover
,
women
are equally representing in the political space and working with the
men
together.
For example
, the president of Nepal is a female and so with the other countries like Finland and Bangladesh. In conclusion, though male and
females
have different nature and different way of performing
a
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work
, I disagree that
men
and
women
should have
work
separation. When
females
are
also
given the opportunity and capacity development, they can
also
do their
job
perfectly in the
work
domain of
men
.
Therefore
, we should not differentiate the
work
on the basis of sex.
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
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  • innate
  • biological differences
  • characteristics
  • gender roles
  • stereotypes
  • equal opportunities
  • gender biases
  • fair representation
  • skills
  • qualifications
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