one people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenage should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some parts of society opine that younger generation should focus on each of the academic
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taught to them, whereas some think it is important to seek one
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and master in it. Both perspectives
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their own weight. So a critical evaluation is required before reaching a logical conclusion. The
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advantage of learning every
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is that students will be having overall knowledge about each
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. They will get more time to explore different fields
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as mathematics, physics and social science.
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,
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who want to pursue higher education his overall grades are taken
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consideration.
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, learning every
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makes them knowledgeable in each
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and they get aware of each
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before entering
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that
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.
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, students should find their
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of interest and focus more on a specific
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has benefitted student in many ways
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as they will be having less burden of various
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, they can give enough time to expertise in one
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. Despite
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can lose interest in their chosen fields and so they
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to do
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. To conclude, concentrating on all school
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instead
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of one specific
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offers us a variety of options for taking a profession in the future. By
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, a learner gains more and more knowledge to become multi-tasking. I believe reading all
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make a human being interdependence and
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.
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