Not enough student chose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reason for this problem? What's the effects on society?

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Science
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subjects
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in university are useful for society development but difficult to be
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persisted
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. It is reasonable that student prone to chose other
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instead
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of
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but will do harm to our society in the near future. There are a couple of reasons that
students
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do not want to choose
science
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subjects
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.
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, the prospective occupations of
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subjects
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are limited because
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the studying aspects are some frontier problem that
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related corporations are focusing
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profiting.
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the subject of space
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is a long term research aspect that rare company is affordable.
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, most
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students
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will try to
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a
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academic position in a university which is a very tired and difficult job, not
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that the positions are
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very limited and quite competitive.
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,
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subjects
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require a solid foundation of mathematic knowledge. %
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, the
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courses of
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subject are very hard to
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and follow.
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the linear algebra and statistic courses require a clear understanding of
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mathematics that learned from higher school, but most of the education in higher school
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without
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clear guidance for student to realize mathematics--they just focus on the final exam.
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, most of the
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courses are very boring, some of them are too abstract and hard to find any implementation in our daily life.
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, society
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science
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to extend the boundary of the world
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as to develop
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essential healthcare system or to reduce
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carbon emission. If without sufficient
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study
science
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subjects
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, the direct impact in the future, is that the development or innovation of products
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hardly
satisifing
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satisfying
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our increasing demand.
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, it is extremely urgent to develop a more effective treatment of cancer, but few
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want to explore inside.
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, a
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negative effect is that the manpower system become unbalance and the competition of opportunities in other
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become more and more intense. Many
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have to face
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jobless problems after they graduated.
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