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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for a manager in the local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this job Tell them when you are free to attend an interview

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Dear Sir or Madam I would like to apply for the post of Manager at your restaurant, in regards to the advertisement. My self-Unnikrishnan, Post-graduate in Hotel management. I have been working for the
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 7 years as an Assistant manager. Have been managing clients and guests, events and
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 of the kitchen. As I have dealt with overall functioning from the front-end to the back end and managed to keep a balance, which
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helped in business development and gaining a good reputation.
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 I would like to retaliate that I am having a Diploma in kitchen hygiene which can be an important factor in handling the hygiene issues of the kitchen, with
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 experience which I have gained in
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 few years will be inevitable for your business. I would like to state that, I am available for the interview any time between 9AM - 12PM. I awaiting
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a quick response from your side Yours faithfully Unnikrishnan
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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