The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of several
category
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categories
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of
energy
including gas, coal,
petrol
, nuclear and others, which were produced in French
during
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between
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1995 and 2005.
Overall
, coal and gas remained the top two most popular sources of power produced
whereas
nuclear and other
energy
accounted for the lowest percentage of
energy
produced in France.
Petrol
was the only sort of
energy
that decreased during the 10-year period Coal was the most popular type of
energy
in France, which accounted for approximately 29.8%
in
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1995 and increased slightly throughout the years, reaching about 31% of total
energy
production in 2005. The same trend applied to the percentage of gas produced as it increased
almost
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0.6%, rising from 29.63%
during
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in
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1995 to slightly over 30.3% in 2005. These two types of
energy
accounted for roughly 60% of
total
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the total
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energy
production of France. During 1995, the
third
most popular type of
energy
was
petrol
, which took up about 29.3% of the whole production.
However
, throughout 10 years,
petrol
was the only type of
energy
that was produced less as its proportion dropped by 10% (19.55%) in 2005.
On the other hand
, there were significant increases in the rates of nuclear
energy
as well as
other types as there was a significant growth of 4%, marking the percentage of these sources of
energy
at 10.1% and 9.1% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, petrol with synonyms.
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