Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world's meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world's meat consumption? What kinds of problem might such measures cause?
Agriculture has two main produce: unused
Meat
and crops. Each of the aforementioned produce
requires Fix the agreement mistake
products
land
to be produced, specifically the production
of meat
, as it relatively requires more land
than the production
of crops. Nowadays, empty land
is slowly running out and as such
, some believe that the world’s consumption of meat
is
should require reductions, the measures to reduce Unnecessary verb
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meat
consumption will be introduced in this
essay. A solution
that first comes to the minds of many is switching people’s eating habits. Instead
of consuming meat
, people could shift toward consuming vegetables, and as crop production
require
less Change the verb form
requires
land
than meat
production
, there is enough land
to satisfy the needs of many people. However
, this
measure has an extremely serious downside, as the nutrients contained in meat
products have been proven by scientists and widely accepted as essential to a human’s development, the elimination of meat
from one’s diet is exceedingly harmful to their body. Another solution
that comes to mind is utilizing vertical farms. Vertical farms are farms that are constructed on top of buildings, as such
they won’t take up more land
. However
, there is
simply not enough funds needed to build and provide maintenance for a large number of these structures, a clear Correct subject-verb agreement
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evident
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for
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of
this
is the absence of such
establishments in many cities all over the world. A final solution
for this
issue that one may think of is to simply revamp used land
for agricultural purposes. Nowadays, there are many plots of land
that are abandoned, polluted and heavily contaminated from human activities and as such
, they should be restored and repurposed for various means, meat
production
is one of those means; therefore
, less or none ofCorrect article usage
the
land
is saved from being used. However
, similar to the second solution
, this
solution
will require a considerable sum of capital. To sum up
, though there have been measures thought of by many people, there has not been a full-proof
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foolproof
solution
to the dilemma of high meat
consumption. Regardless, experts and scientists are still in the pursuit of an effective measure against this
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite