Some people are concerned that children spend too much time on computers - playing games, chatting and watch video. But all this time is actually good preparation for children, who will have to spend many hours working on computers throughout their education and working lives.

Nowadays, people are starting using computers especially teenagers

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, as well as childrens and some people,

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children

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children

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and some people claim that

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is

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expirience

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experience

for children to spend their

time

, improve their skills for future work, while others think that

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is bad for children cause of

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deterioration of

vision

and dependence. In

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I will discuss both views and give examples. On the one hand, kids become

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on games and

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is

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point of issue. What

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mean by

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is that they start to spend much

time

on

computer

and

vision

will begin to deteriorate,

also

they will have health problems.

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,

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Italian

scince

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science

since

conducted an investigation between country boy and city, there was

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difference in

vision

the country boy saw 9 of 10

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while

city boy saw 6 of 10. For

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reason

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we

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limit the

time

of playing or using

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a computer

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computer

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computers

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for kids.

On the other hand

, if we limit the

time

of using

computer

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and will wear glasses for defending weaning from the

computer

it will be awesome for children

expirience

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experience

.

In other words

, they may already be adapted and will be more effective than

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beginners

. For

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instance

, all the jobs with

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reputation require

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work experience and

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level of skills

companys

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companies

such

as google Telegram and Facebook

they

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apply

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requre

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require

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apply

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experience and

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diploma. In conclusion,

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strongly believe that people can combine both of these sides

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the

time

of spending

time

also

defend

vision

and take some

expirience

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experience

.