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Young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in the natural environment. Why? And how to encourage them to go out?

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Nowadays, a climbing number of young adults prefer to engage in other entertaining and relaxing
activities
,
such
 as watching TV series, playing electronic games and board-role playing games . I think
that is
 a negative development, so it is necessary to raise
people
’s health awareness. There are several reasons behind
this
 phenomenon. The
first
 reason why the majority of
people
 seldom get in touch with nature is that today
people
 with heavy
workload
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 have no enough time to have rest and rechange batteries during the weekdays. In fact, they keep the habit of sitting and working in front of
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screen for a long time. If they go out
for
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hiking, climbing,
bush walking
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 on the weekends, they will find it really time-consuming and
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energy- consuming
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. When they come back to their office on Monday, they will probably feel exhausted and can hardly
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 on their task. The other cause is that a great
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variety of . In the past, going out with friends and families was the common choice for many
people
 during vacations and weekends.
However
,
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toady
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 as advances in technology,
people
 rely on
the
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cutting-edge equipment which
lead
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 to
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app developers and E-game developers focus on developing various games to attract young
people
. Compared with outdoor
activities
 that require more time, energy, and skills.The indoor
activities
 are accessible and appealing to youth.
Therefore
,
the
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outdoor
activities
 have been lost
its
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popular
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. There is no doubt that outdoor
activities
 are beneficial to
people
’s health, so measurements should be taken to encourage
people
 to be more active in
this
 choice.
Firstly
, official media can publicize the benefits of outdoor
activities
, including putting up articles or uploading some videos online.
In addition
, the community can organize some outdoor campaigns with incentive mechanisms. The money rewards should be provided to
people
 who do outdoor exercises more often. In conclusion, young
people
 should pay attention to their health. More and more young
people
 are suffering from chronic diseases due to their sedentary
lifestyle
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. I believe these measurements mentioned can reverse
this
 situation.
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