Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

The drastic changes observed in the earth patterns due to global warming effects is the most alarming concern today. In

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of oil, gas and coal are necessary for

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generation and without them the there will be financial crises. Even though I see a point with the former view, I cannot completely agree with it. I find the

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for the working of the nation. My inclination towards the same is justified in the following paragraphs. There are several reasons for adopting the

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of gas, coal and crude oils. Since

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highly dependent on them. A good example

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crude oil which is extracted and

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machines and vehicles.

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steam and coal

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in generating the

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large scale industries.

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of the whole country can be abruptly affected. Another best example is not all countries are gifted with proper sunlight,

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throughout the year. The weather varies

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humans

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of fossil fuels.

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of people encourage the use of

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of energy like

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and

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. Their existence cannot be denied as

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forms are naturally and readily available and

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, there are several countries like India where they receive sunlight almost eight months

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year. The solar panels are laid in huge projects over dam construction, are equally promoted and subsidised to their citizens , for participating

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extremely cheaper rates. To conclude,

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of renewable energy resources like sun and

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are highly encouraged by the environmentalists, it is not feasible for every country

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are not blessed to have them enough to generate

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balanced way. As it will help in sustaining the nation with its ever-growing population need and will

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maintaining

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cleaner and safer environment.