Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.do you agree or disagree?

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a

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wage even if it doesn't appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with

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opinion and think

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job

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satisfaction

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is much more important than

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of all, I believe that

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satisfaction

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gives people a sense of fulfilment that no money can guarantee. Even , if someone is earning a high

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, feels tensed and compromises with his conscience,

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person won't enjoy his life. While pursuing one's interest will always bring pleasure and

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of

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.

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, a lot of famous researchers made their career choices

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because of appealing wages, but because they were passionate about science.That's why it is more important to choose the kind

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of work that makes you happy than to look only at

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salary

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.

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, doing what you like keeps you motivated and

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leads to

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career growth.

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, there is a strong

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between

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satisfaction

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and productivity.People who love their jobs can easily excel in their fields of work and achieve better results than those,who put

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salary

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on

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the

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place.

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,Henry Miller decided to leave his everyday

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despite a good wage and ventured to

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a writer. And after enduring years of ups and

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he became one of the most famous and

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authors of the twentieth century.

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,

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of jobs that keep you satisfied outweigh the drawbacks of a low

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in

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a long-term perspective. To conclude, I strongly believe that

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satisfaction

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is more beneficial than

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because it makes people happy and motivated.