One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

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of
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which is
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day by day. There is
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number of cars in the
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will articulate some causes of it and propose some possible solutions to them.
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is become
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the major
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of
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industrialised
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. One major
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is less usage of public
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. To explicate it, the population in the
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are extremely higher than other
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areas
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living in the
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use their personal
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vehicles
on the roads which makes the roads busier.
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of Individuals do not use public
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to save their time.
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problem
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is not getting any solution. Another major reason is there are
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oppertunities
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work outside the big
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.
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People
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move to
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for work and facilities they which they cannot get in the rural
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. They move for bread
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and
butter for themselves and their
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families
which makes raise in
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population
in
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as well as
traffic
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. The large
cities
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do not have
streatergies
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strategies
to handle that
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populations
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auckland
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is
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as the busiest city in
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new
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and
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faces
traffic
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problem
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because it is an industrialised area with heaps of jobs. To crack
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government have to take some vital step to push
people
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to public
transport
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.
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, In Delhi, the
goverment
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government
took out the rule even and odd which means the
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vehicles
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with the even and odd
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could be used one day each in a week.
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it reduced the
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traffic
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. More
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opportunities
should
be build
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in areas outside the
cities
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. so the population of the
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could be
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under control
and make the roadS flexible for the
people
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. To conclude
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,
people
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should use more public
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rather than private. and the
goverment
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government
should make more development outside the
cities
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which
attratct
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attract
more
people
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so the population in the
cities
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become uncontrol.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • urban population
  • public transportation
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • economic strength
  • consumerism
  • car ownership
  • commuting
  • peak hours
  • public transit
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing
  • remote work
  • flexible working hours
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion charges
  • traffic management systems
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