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the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)

#hours #work #week #people #categories #activities #childcare #home #housework
The bar chart illustrates the medium
hours
 of free work per week realized by people. There are various kinds and consequences for married males and females in the categories introduced. Overall, the high rate of married females outnumbered those married males by a significant margin.While married
men
 modes were relatively similar,
nevertheless
 the number of married
men
 with 3+
children
 decreased gradually. With regards to married
women
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 free work per week with 3+
children
 are the top almost double than without
children
 ( 60
hours
 and 30
hours
 respectively). On top of that,in married
women
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 every category rises sharply and the maximum index was shown with 60
hours
. The number of married
men
 without
children
 with 1-2
children
 is level off almost the amount closer 20
hours
. Unlike others,with 3 or more
children
 in
men
 the pointer fall. The index was appreciated
approximately
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 16
hours
.
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