Tourism today creates a variety of problems, such as pollution due to flights, transport and dirty water. Do you think that governments should impose extra taxes on flights or accommodation to restrict today’s tourism industry?
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tourism
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however
, it has brought numerous dire consequences including burgeoning of pollution owing to air
and road transport and polluted water. In order to control it, It is believed by a vast section of the society that the tariffs should be introduced by authority on flights or accommodation. I strongly agree with this
view and in my discourse ahead, the ideas in favor
of my belief are discussed.
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To begin
with, it seems obvious to see that extra tax on air
tickets would restrict air
travelling. This
is because the final cost to passengers for air
journey
will be higher if government
impose more taxes. Resultantly, people's preference to go overseas during holidays would be changed and they prefer to visit local tourist
attractions which ultimately would reduce serious effects of it on environment
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For example
, as per report
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air
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tourism
.
Additionally
, another prominent measure to control tourists' movement at tourist
places
is additional charges by local bodies on accommodation. In other words
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charges
tourist
places
. This
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tourism
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In conclusion, while the growth in tourism
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government
should start to charge more to air
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