In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the majority of
applicants
in
particular
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job
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jobs
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are required to have more experienced
knowledge
than theoretical
knowledge
.
Thus
, some
people
are assumed that
job
applicants
will not need any formal
qualifications
later.
However
, I
strongely
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strongly
disagree with the latter statement and there are
following
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reasons why individuals still need to have formal
qualifications
.
To begin
with,
people
, back in the days, normally are studied and provided visible works that
shows
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knowledge
which require to have for the
job
they apply.
For example
, college students who are applying consistently prepare for several exams to earn qualified
documents
in order to demonstrate their own abilities related to the jobs.
Furthermore
, having formal
qualifications
support the
applicants
as
evidences
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evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
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. Specifically, evaluators can be acknowledged each applicant's
knowledge
scores. It is necessary to know how
much specialized
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knowledge
do
applicants
have for a
job
. Practical
skills
is
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the latter matter of fact. If there is no basic
knowledge
in
particular
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field that
applicants
should have, it does not strongly support
people
in general.
In contrast
, some
people
may have stated that
job
applicants
will no longer require
documents
which
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that
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can be proved them as qualified
applicants
. Those
people
believe that some of the
applicants
have better practical
skills
than other
applicants
who
only
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are only
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knowledgeable following the
job
.
Moreover
, practical
skills
are more necessary to have in order to succeed in a particular field.
Also
, having outstanding experiences grab more attention from society. Unlike
the
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past, society
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for
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people
who are
skillful
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in
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real-world
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real
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the real
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world rather than
people
who only know about theoretical
knowledge
.
However
,
this
does not give any
further
reason to provide
definite
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a definite
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statement that
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someday
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some day
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someday
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in the future
applicants
will not need any formal
documents
that depict individuals
knowledge
because practical
skills
are fluctuated
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fluctuate
have fluctuated
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factor substantially. For that reason, practical
skills
derives
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from based on theoretical
knowledge
. To sum up, even though having practical
skills
are becoming
more
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a more
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significant factor compared to the past, there still will need
people
to earn
qualifications
that
proves
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each applicant's capacity in a
job
.
Therefore
, I personally believe
people
in the future will require to hand in
documents
for
job
applications
with
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for
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the following reasons.
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