Some peopre think thot cullurol lrodilions moy be desfroyed when |hey ore used os rnoney-rnoking oftrocfions oimed of fourisfs. Ofhers believe il rs fhe only woy fo sove fhese frodifions. Discuss on bolh sides ond give your opinion.

It is irrefutable that cultural

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attract lure from all over the world and develop

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economy. Some individuals are of the opinion that these may be destroyed if they are modified to attract

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, these cultural attractions will die. ln the following paragraphs, I shall discuss both sides of the argument. l, personally side with the latter view. We have to make these cultural

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alluring for

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because we need

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boosts our economy and

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we get a chance to spread our

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to different countries.

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our artists and artisans do not earn money from their art, which depicts our

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and tradition,

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art will die off and we'll only be the losers.

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is the backbone of any count4/s economy and every country does

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effort to attract

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. Many people depend on

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for their livelihood. People in the food industry hotel industry and transport industry depend on

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. Presentation is very important to attract visitors, and to present nicely some change is unavoidable.

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, when cultural

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are used as money-making attractions, they lose their original features. Sometimes it makes cultural

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disappear altogether.

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and tradition are

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and minor superficial changes cannot harm them in any way. Change is the law of nature and all we should look into

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that the changes are made with caution to retain the inherent elements of

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. Summing up, to save cultural

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we need to make some changes to make them captivating to the tourist of today.

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we don't do so we'll lose our cultural

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altogether and we'll lose our

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