Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of traveling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, due to pandemics,
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globally
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most of the employees are working from
home
and it's become a major cause of concern in our society. In
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will explain detailly about pros and cons of working from
home
with a strong conclusion.
Although
working from
home
holds a lot of huge benefits. Everyone likes to work conveniently and it can be possible through working from
home
.
For example
, My neighbour enjoys her profession these days as she is working from
home
without any rules and regulations.
Moreover
, she is not worried about punctuality, nor dressing code, journey problems, as well as free from monitoring sort of things.
Thus
, she is a free bird at
home
alternatively she is getting pay and having a fun and relaxing life. so, she is enjoying freedom. Whereas, working from
home
also
have some demerits in it.Because of
this
type of homely environment employers will be facing laziness in terms of work and discipline.
For instance
,they
also
become overweight by seating at
home
and munching all types of junk foods and not doing any physical exercise as they constantly stick at
home
which leads to stress, anxiety and lack of half payment as a company doesn't pay full those who work at
home
.
Therefore
, it may affect our health mentally, physically and financially.
Hence
, it's better and worth doing our job from the company rather than from
home
. In conclusion, working from
home
disadvantages outweigh its advantages as it keeps human beings in loss and in my perspective working from
home
is a quite bad thing and destroying ourselves. So, I believe every place has its worth to do some task .
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