Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of traveling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, due to pandemics,
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most of the employees are working from
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and it's become a major cause of concern in our society. In
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will explain detailly about pros and cons of working from
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with a strong conclusion.
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working from
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holds a lot of huge benefits. Everyone likes to work conveniently and it can be possible through working from
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, My neighbour enjoys her profession these days as she is working from
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without any rules and regulations.
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, she is not worried about punctuality, nor dressing code, journey problems, as well as free from monitoring sort of things.
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, she is a free bird at
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alternatively she is getting pay and having a fun and relaxing life. so, she is enjoying freedom. Whereas, working from
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have some demerits in it.Because of
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type of homely environment employers will be facing laziness in terms of work and discipline.
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,they
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become overweight by seating at
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and munching all types of junk foods and not doing any physical exercise as they constantly stick at
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which leads to stress, anxiety and lack of half payment as a company doesn't pay full those who work at
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, it may affect our health mentally, physically and financially.
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, it's better and worth doing our job from the company rather than from
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. In conclusion, working from
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disadvantages outweigh its advantages as it keeps human beings in loss and in my perspective working from
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is a quite bad thing and destroying ourselves. So, I believe every place has its worth to do some task .
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