In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, accumulating theoretical
knowledge
can be
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beneficial
benefited
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practical skills goes a long way. In the coming future, I believe that employers will put more
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emphasis
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on hiring depending on the
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work experience
instead
of their theoretical
knowledge
.
Firstly
, Theoretical
knowledge
gives you the foundation of any field which is
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essential
to have.
Although
you are capable of
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understanding
a certain subject
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doesn't
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means you are able to implement that skill into practice.
For instance
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worked for several years on a certain job has more
knowledge
on how to do the work.
Furthermore
, he is
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completing the work task given
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as well
as having the ability to solve problems quickly.
Secondly
, employees are focusing more on hiring people who have many years of
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practical
working skills than having multiple degrees.
This
is due to the fact that some majors require
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information you need to know to do a certain job as other fields require engaging with the job for a long period of time to have sharper techniques.
For example
, it takes a longer period of time to train a new employer fresh out of
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college
instead
of having an applicant with several years of working experience. In conclusion, having practical skills
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having theoretical
knowledge
in the
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job market
now.
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