People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?

Sugary

drinks

are

addicted

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for many

people

and they are not capable to stop drinking

that

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them

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over and over. In

this

essay, I will discuss causes

people

can be addicted to soft

drinks

and

solution

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solutions

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to

people

decrease

consumption

of those

beverages

. Chief among the causes of

this

problem is the modern lifestyle.

Beverage

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with added sugar

such

as

,

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soda, cola, and energy

drinks

, are very tempting for

young

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generation. Especially

for

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children and

adolescent

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adolescents

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are easily attracted because all soft

drinks

ads are everywhere, easy to find in every

convention

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store and the flavour of

beverages

are various and sweet.

However

, they do not conceive enough about its effects. The risk of type 2 diabetes, heart disease, and other chronic diseases are

further

instance

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if we consuming more those

beverages

. In order to reduce the

consumption

of soft

drinks

, I believe we must

first

address its root causes. Perhaps the most effective method of doing

this

would be

start

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with gaining awareness ourselves. Admittedly, we could not afford to

limited

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the distribution of cola,

however

, we can increase the

consumption

those

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beverages

with replace them with

healthy

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juice or limited the

consumption

the

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drinks

only

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to only

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once

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one

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once

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a month or even less. On

further

measure would be to promote

healthier

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lifestyle in ads and encourage our relatives for more aware of healthiness. In reality,

this

problem is unlikely to be resolved in short term.

Nevertheless

, we can keep going to have

healthy

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body and I believe most

people

will conceive about healthiness sooner.