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Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be beneficial to children. Others believe this has negative effects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Visual entertainment is becoming an integral part of everyone's life. It is often thought that spending more screen time is advantageous for adolescent children.
However
, others believe that
such
 a medium is causing a bad effect. In
this
 essay , I will discuss the reason for their views and explain why I feel it to be a negative trend. Certain features of technology-driven gadgets are important to be known to the
next
 generation. As the future is going to be technology-driven, and everyone spends their leisure period with these gadgets, it is expected from a child to be aware of, in terms of how to use it? TCS,
for instance
, developing new games which will teach Mathathematics to school students in the form of games.
Therefore
, these games are developing interest in them for study. Admittedly, spending too many hours on these gadgets will have negative effects. The main one is in terms of health. A human being develops most of its body cells in its young stage, and exposure to screen for more than a specified hour can have a deteriorating effect on the eyes and
also
 cause obesity. In an Oxford study,
Although
 the average screen time for the age group of 8 to 18 years is 5 hours, most people spend more than that.
In addition
, body movements are
also
 limited which causes obesity at the early stage of their life. In my view,
although
, it is important to be aware of new technology, it is causing a bad effect on health. So, it should be practice to limit the time spent by the young age group. In conclusion, most people spend their duration in front of technology-driven apparatus. Even though it may have a benefit for the future of the young generation,
this
 can cause more problems in terms of health.
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