Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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The science of

food

and how to prepare it has become an interesting subject nowadays,

however

some people think that students should study important subjects.

This

essay will highlight the pros and cons of learning the science of

food

First

of all, we know that

food

is our daily need.

Hence

, we should really be careful of everything that we put inside our bodies. If we do not have the nutrition knowledge of

food

and how its process, we will consume whatever we want which will result in a serious health problem, obesity. Other than that, if we consume low-nutrient

food

, it can lead to malnutrition

consequently

. On top of that, if we have allergic yet we do not know the

food

contents that we eat, it can trigger our allergic.

On the other hand

, I think there are many fundamental subjects that should be learned at school that I believe will be very beneficial for the students future.

For instance

, I think

English

should be taught at an early age at school.

English

is a worldwide language spoken which will help the children to communicate with other people from different countries. Other than that, in top universities in my country, the books and presentations are always in

English

Hence

, if the students do not understand

English

, they will face difficulty in understanding the subject. To sum up,

although

food

is our primary need, I think it should be elective

subjects

Fix the agreement mistake

subject

show examples

. I believe there are still many important

subject

Change to a plural noun

subjects

show examples

to be studied

such

English

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