Some people think that all University students should study whatever they like.others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful, such as those related to science and technology.

Different
subjects
are needed for different professions, it depends on the interests and the future plans of the pupil. A
lot
of people opines that only
subjects
that are useful should be chosen at universities
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for example
science and technology,
on the
contrary
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beliefs that one should
study
whatever they want in
university
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. I agree that there’s a
lot
of benefits from choosing what they love in
university
, in the following paragraphs I will explain why so.
Firstly
no one can live your
life
, only you get to live the
life
you want to.
Hence
choosing what you want in
life
plays a crucial part to
live
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a successful
life
.
Secondly
studying something you have zero
interests
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in can have a negative impact on mental health as well as on physical health.
For instance
, having
interest
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in dancing but having to
study
pre med
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in
university
, can cause a
lot
of distress to the student.
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it’s my belief that every individual is different in their own unique way so, forcing them to
study
subjects
they have no care for can have
detrimental
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effect on the
over all
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grades. Some having to quit due to bad grades. Which might cause conflict within oneself
also
with the loved ones.
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there are a
lot
of other fields, that does not require special science
subjects
to have a blast of a career.
For example
to be a successful football player you don’t have to
study
medicine in
university
. To summarise, even though science and technological fields are vast and
ever changing
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, just like how we pick clothes we like,
subjects
chosen at
university
should be the ones that are interesting and should be about what you are passionate about.
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