Some people think that all University students should study whatever they like.others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful, such as those related to science and technology.
Different
subjects
are needed for different professions, it depends on the interests and the future plans of the pupil. A lot
of people opines that only subjects
that are useful should be chosen at universitiesAdd the comma(s)
, for example,
for example
science and technology, on the
contrary
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,contrary
there’s
beliefs that one should Change the verb form
there are
study
whatever they want in university
. I agree that there’s a Add an article
a university
lot
of benefits from choosing what they love in university
, in the following paragraphs I will explain why so.
Firstly
no one can live your life
, only you get to live the life
you want to. Hence
choosing what you want in life
plays a crucial part to live
a successful Change the verb form
living
life
. Secondly
studying something you have zero interests
in can have a negative impact on mental health as well as on physical health. Fix the agreement mistake
interest
For instance
, having interest
in dancing but having to Add an article
an interest
study
pre med
in Add a hyphen
pre-med
university
, can cause a lot
of distress to the student.
Also
it’s my belief that every individual is different in their own unique way so, forcing them to Add a comma
,Also
study
subjects
they have no care for can have detrimental
effect on the Add an article
a detrimental
over all
grades. Some having to quit due to bad grades. Which might cause conflict within oneself Correct your spelling
overall
also
with the loved ones. Moreover
there are a Add a comma
,Moreover
lot
of other fields, that does not require special science subjects
to have a blast of a career. For example
to be a successful football player you don’t have to study
medicine in university
.
To summarise, even though science and technological fields are vast and ever changing
, just like how we pick clothes we like, Add a hyphen
ever-changing
subjects
chosen at university
should be the ones that are interesting and should be about what you are passionate about.Submitted by f.lamiea on
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