Write about the following topic: A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Security
, infrastructure
development
and public
services
are important
services
for a
country
. Some
people
believe that the
government
should only
faciliate
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facilitate
defense
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defence
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and
urben
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urban
development
while
private
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the private
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sector
should provide other
services
. In
this
essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I believe it is a part of the
government
's role to provide other
services
such
as education, health and public
security
other than
the
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infrastructure
development
.
To begin
with, it is undeniable that
private
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the private
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sector
plays an indispensable role in
development
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the development
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of a
country
. Since the
government
does not have
necessary
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the necessary
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financial capabilities to cover the entire
country
with public
services
, private organizations provide those
services
in most cities.
For instance
, many developing countries allow
private
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the private
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sector
to do investments in the
country
to build private schools, hospitals while the
government
provide
defense
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defence
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services
and infrastructural
development
.
This
helps the state to reduce the cost to maintain
such
services
as those are handling by the private
sector
.
However
, even though providing
such
services
by the private
sector
has many benefits to the
government
, it is not beneficial for
people
as those
services
would not be free of charge. Whereas private groups or individuals spend their money to provide those public
services
to the community, it would not help for every
people
in the
country
because their main aim is to earn profits.
For instance
, if the private organization handle education and health
services
instead
of the
government
,
then
not every person can afford the cost of these
services
so that only rich
people
would get
this
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these
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benefits so that it is intuitively obvious that these should be managed by the
government
not private groups. Because of
this
reason, It elucidates the point that the
government
should provide all of these
services
and developments with help of
people
's tax money. In summary,
security
, urban
development
and public
services
play an indispensable role in
development
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the development
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of a
country
. Some
individual
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individuals
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believe that the
government
should only focus on
security
and
infrastruture
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infrastructure
development
while private sectors provide other
services
. In
this
essay
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I discussed both views and explained why the
government
should handle all of the
development
and
services
.
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