Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Every

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has its

traditions

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and culture that they follow. In recent times, people are interested in exploring the whole world. In

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cases, when they

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different

countries

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, they have to follow respective

culture

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and

tradition

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traditions

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accordingly

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. In my opinion,

visitors

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should be welcomed by the tourist

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their local

customs

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or

traditions

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being followed. There are few

countries

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that are very sentimental about their

traditions

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and local

behaviour

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like Afghanisthan, India etc. There are

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countries

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that do not feel particular about the

behaviour

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or

customs

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followed by the

visitors

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. When people

visit

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countries

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that have

stricit

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strict

traditions

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to follow, the

visitors

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should be well aware of their way of living and custom

that is

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followed in the

country

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that they are planning to

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. By following the tradition or custom of

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country

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can be

benificial

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beneficial

to the visitor itself. The local people may get impressed that the

visitors

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are following their

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and may offer help to the

visitors

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and take good care of them . Local people‘s support is extremely important to stay in a particular

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.

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, there is

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an argument that the tourist

countries

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should be able to accept

visitors

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irrespective of their

customs

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and

behaviour

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. Host

countries

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are visited by

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a plethora

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of

tourists

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throughout the world. There are numerous

traditions

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followed in different parts of the world. It is not fair to expect that the

tourists

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visiting their

country

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should follow their local

customs

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and

behaviour

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.

Tourists

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can enjoy their

visit

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only when they are free of rules.

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may

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get terrified to

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country

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which is strict in its local

customs

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and

behaviour

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. Eventually, the tourism rate for that

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will drop.

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, with all the above considerations , I conclude that the

visitors

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should be welcomed with open hearts

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so that they can enjoy their trip and will be interested to revisit the

country

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.