You recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter introduce yourself and say when the incident happened describe what you saw and heard say what you would like the bus company to do about it You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to raise a complaint about one of your
bus
drivers. My name is Amit Chauhan and a frequent traveller of your buses. I must say that your
bus
service is quite good in town and drivers are
well trained
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proffessionals
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professionals
. But
this
Friday my experience was quite the opposite with your
bus
driver, Aman. He was rash driving and did fight with the co-
pessangers
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passengers
.
This
Friday afternoon around 2 PM, I was travelling from Delhi to Noida and found that
bus
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driver was drunk and
diving
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driving
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rashly. He almost hit an old lady who was trying to cross the road. When we raised the concern
the
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he started fighting with us and left the
bus
unattended. I would like to request you to penalize the driver by detaining him for about 15 days and
enroll
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him
for
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course
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about
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of drink and driving. I look forward to hearing your response. Yours faithfully, Amit
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Incident
  • Driver's behavior
  • Attitude
  • Passenger
  • Rude
  • Manner
  • Inappropriate
  • Unprofessional
  • Responsible
  • Safety
  • Complaint
  • Apology
  • Compensation
  • Improve
  • Customer service
  • Conduct
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