You recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter introduce yourself and say when the incident happened describe what you saw and heard say what you would like the bus company to do about it You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to raise a complaint about one of your bus
drivers.
My name is Amit Chauhan and a frequent traveller of your buses. I must say that your bus
service is quite good in town and drivers are well trained
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well-trained
proffessionals
. But Correct your spelling
professionals
this
Friday my experience was quite the opposite with your bus
driver, Aman. He was rash driving and did fight with the co-pessangers
.
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passengers
This
Friday afternoon around 2 PM, I was travelling from Delhi to Noida and found that bus
driver was drunk and Correct article usage
the bus
diving
rashly. He almost hit an old lady who was trying to cross the road. When we raised the concern Correct your spelling
driving
the
he started fighting with us and left the Remove the article
apply
bus
unattended.
I would like to request you to penalize the driver by detaining him for about 15 days and enroll
him Change the spelling
enrol
for
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on
course
about Correct article usage
a course
implications
of drink and driving.
I look forward to hearing your response.
Yours faithfully,
AmitCorrect article usage
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