Earning is important in satisfying
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need;
, their social status exist.While income is given priority in choosing a
,I believe that other factors are
to be considered in choosing a
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and
satisfaction.
High salary jobs
fulfillsChange the verb form
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one' aspiration rather satisfying their basic needs.
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to lead a
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,high salaried can buy a car,house and son on if they are paid enough.
,people with poor remuneration will not be able to endure their commitments.
of luxury living, low salaried will just accomplish their food,education and clothes .Consecutively,a
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gives the workers ,and his family
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.
On contrary,while adopting work satisfaction and
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high income provides professionals with accomplishments and enjoyment in long run.
to say,they progress in their
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with
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.To
,an artist or a musician can progress in their
slow and steadily ,but they enjoy their
without any guilty
.
,the
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for progression and respect will persuade them to be successful in their
path.
,
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despite gaining money is more significant.
In conclusion,though huge remuneration is important for survival,it is
obvious to
satisfaction and
for achievable
growth.I believe,a choice of dream jobs is a trait for happiness in
.