Earning is important in satisfying
peoples'sRemove the s
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need;
however
, their social status exist.While income is given priority in choosing a
career
,I believe that other factors are
also
to be considered in choosing a
job
such
as
harmoniousCorrect article usage
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environment
and
job
satisfaction.
High salary jobs
fulfillsChange the verb form
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one' aspiration rather satisfying their basic needs.
In other
people
optionAdd a missing verb
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for
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salary
professionFix the agreement mistake
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to lead a
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life
.
For example
,high salaried can buy a car,house and son on if they are paid enough.
Moreover
,people with poor remuneration will not be able to endure their commitments.
Instead
of luxury living, low salaried will just accomplish their food,education and clothes .Consecutively,a
job
with more
stipendFix the agreement mistake
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gives the workers ,and his family
anChange the article
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environment
.
On contrary,while adopting work satisfaction and
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environment
rather
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high income provides professionals with accomplishments and enjoyment in long run.
That is
to say,they progress in their
career
throughout their
life
if they
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with
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job
.To
,an artist or a musician can progress in their
life
slow and steadily ,but they enjoy their
life
without any guilty
.
Besides
,the
environment
with good
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and
opportunityFix the agreement mistake
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for progression and respect will persuade them to be successful in their
career
path.
Hence
,
ambitiousCorrect article usage
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job
despite gaining money is more significant.
In conclusion,though huge remuneration is important for survival,it is
also
obvious to
job
satisfaction and
environment
for achievable
career
growth.I believe,a choice of dream jobs is a trait for happiness in
life
.