When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, it is

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to reject that money is one of the essential factors for living in the modern world so that choosing the

job

based on a high salary has become

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main steam among fresh university graduates. Despite the aforementioned fact, I strongly disagree

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the statement because presumably there are other factors, which are more important than the high payment, and are needed to be

considerated

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considered

including the background of education, and the individual preference.

Firstly

, the major primary consideration for selecting the jobs is

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the background

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of

study

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. To be successful in the specific field of occupation, they need to have the working experiment, which can get from

internship

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during studying in the university.

For example

, the graduates, who get the degree from

agricultural

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the agricultural

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field have the skills for growing crops, insects and pest management and soil analysis, which are suitable for working in

agriucltural

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agricultural

agriculture

or farming companies.

Therefore

, selecting a career based on the degree plays

pivotal

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role in working succeed. The

second

consideration for the

job

selection is the preferences of students. People always make a good result in their favourite activities.

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, my

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tasks

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is working out so I decided to open the gym and being a trainer to generate my income.

Consequently

, I am happy

to begin

a day with my ideal

job

, and tirelessly work for 8 hours a day without boring and

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exhausting

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. In conclusion, there are various factors, which need to be considered more than

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a substantial

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amount of

salary

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such

as educational background and individual interest. Sincerely, I would like to urge the new graduates not to select their future

job

related to high income.