Discuss about the person you dislike and the causes why you detest. Also, name 3 virtues

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I had no harsh feelings about her, but slowly she was getting over my nerves due to her hypocritical nature and selfish behaviour. She kind of put people in a toxic situation which makes it difficult for the other person to come out. The reason I do not like her is that she considers herself the highest of all and does not respect the other persons feeling. She is good at convincing people when it comes to any professional situation.
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, she is disciplined and organized.
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, her communication skills are way beyond awesome.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • antipathy
  • detest
  • animosity
  • disdain
  • repugnant
  • arrogant
  • dishonest
  • reprehensible
  • estrangement
  • malicious
  • conflict
  • integrity
  • empathy
  • altruism
  • patience
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