Success is often measured in terms of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a goo measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not.
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has had been considered as a status symbol since Use synonyms
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civilisation begins; but, nowadays, people perceive Correct your spelling
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success
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success
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wealth is extremely important to sustain in the present era. Correct article usage
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body are the basic demands of a human being; Correct article usage
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such
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money
. Thereby, the populace perceives a wealthy person as the most successful, because he has Use synonyms
potential
and sources to own luxurious items. Correct article usage
the potential
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underdeveloping
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therefore
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success
and happiness.
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success
. Indian history has had been witnessed many Use synonyms
such
kind-hearted humans who were not rich, but their contributions to society are commemorated and Linking Words
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made them alive in peoples' hearts forever. Change the verb form
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For instance
, Mothers Teresa was a social worker who had run Linking Words
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NGO to help the populace who were suffering from lethal diseases like tuberculosis and leprosy. Even still today, she has been recalled with full respect by the mass for her diligent efforts for the betterment of mankind. On contrary, a drug lord who Change the article
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possess
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stuffs
would be criticised for his misdeeds.
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then
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money
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success
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