Science can now offer people a life expectancy of close to one hundred years or even more. Some people view it in a positive light, but others believe it creates some problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The increase in lifespan has sparked an endless debate of

advantages

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and disadvantages of

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progress. Some sections are highly optimistic about it whereas others opine that the downsides

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the advantages. According to

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, human

life

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expectancy should not increase any

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. The rapid developments in the field of medical sciences have to the exponential rise in the run of human

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. The upside of

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evolution is that as people are living longer lives they have the opportunity of spending more time with their families which was not possible earlier due to their commitments as working professionals. Retired persons

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enjoy the freedom to travel worldwide and

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their bucket lists. They are capable of guiding the younger generations, advice them and help them during their crucial age.

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, my maternal grandmother celebrated her 81st birthday

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year. She has travelled all over India and

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ventured on international tours to Singapore, Bangkok, Malaysia and Dubai. She is able to spend her time pursuing activities she enjoys. The rapid inflation in

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span has forced healthy older

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individuals

to work and earn a living.

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means that they occupy employment opportunities

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could have been pursued by younger generations. A human has a few basic needs of food, water, clothing, shelter, etc. Fulfilling these needs of the

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human race is a burdensome task for the environment and the increased

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span has made its contributions to add to it.

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has led to

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a decline

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decline

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in the quality of existence. The enhancement in the lifetime is not sufficient as the basic standard of living and independence of every human has to be maintained.

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becomes a herculean task for older people as the declining body functionings give way to limited movements, easily contracted illnesses, limitations in treatment options which implies that the person will suffer many hardships.

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, my paternal grandmother, suffered a hip injury after she fell in the bathroom. She is bedridden since

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. Her quality of

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has declined dramatically since

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. And an independent woman like would not have wished or imagined

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a downfall. To conclude, it is a feather in mankind's cap that the lifespan has risen, but

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an extension

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life

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beyond

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will cause innumerable issues which are not answerable as of now.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Science can now offer people a life expectancy of close to one hundred years or even more. Some people view it in a positive light, but others believe it creates some problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Your opinion

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