In most part of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, discuss the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions.

These days,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

crowded

traffic

is increasingly becoming the major problem in many countries across the world, even Thailand, which Bangkok is reported to be ranked in the top five cities having the

most dense

Change the adjective

densest

show examples

traffic

in the world. Overall,

this

essay will mention the predominant

causes

of

traffic

jams including

an

Change the article

a

show examples

dramatic increase in the

number

of

cars

, and poor infrastructures.

Moreover

, the promising remedies for these

problems

will be addressed afterwards. The primary cause needed to take into

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

consideration is the

number

of

cars

, which has enormously raised over the past few decades. With the increased

number

of

cars

, the roads are full of them, especially at rush hours. To illustrate

this

, Pahonyothin

Road

during 7 - 9 AM can be a good example of the

traffic

jam's definition, which drivers may spend 2 hours

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

travelling 10

kilometers

Change the spelling

kilometres

show examples

.

In addition

,

poor

Add an article

the poor

show examples

road

is another major

problems

Replace the adjective

problem

show examples

for the alarming rate of

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

traffic

. the narrow

road

with only two lens cannot

accomodates

Correct your spelling

accommodate

accommodates

a tremendous surge

number

of

cars

due to these two main

causes

, the volume of

traffic

is eventually rising beyond the alarming

thershold

Correct your spelling

threshold

thresholds

. To compensate

the

Change preposition

for the

show examples

aforementioned

causes

of

traffic

jams, imposing higher taxes on car's prices and fuel are the promising solutions to the

incrased

Correct your spelling

increased

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

number

of

cars

on the

road

. People are discouraged to buy a new car because they are concerned about the extra payment.

Furthermore

, improving public transportation is considered to be

a

Change the article

an

show examples

effective method as convenient buses and skytrains encourage citizens to use them

instead

of using private

cars

.

For example

,

Japaneses

Correct your spelling

Japanese

prefer to use

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

public trains because it is more comfortable for them due to having many train

station

Fix the agreement mistake

stations

show examples

in

Change preposition

apply

show examples

everywhere, which they do not have to find

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

parking for their

cars

.

Therefore

, according to these efficient solutions, all the mentioned

problems

will be alleviated. In conclusion, the increase in density of the

traffic

is become

Change to the active voice

becomes

has become

show examples

the seriously concerned

problems

found in either Thailand or other countries all over the world.

Although

the

traffic

is escalated due to two main

causes

, namely

an

Change the article

a

show examples

dramatic increase in

number

Change the article

a number

the number

show examples

of

cars

, and bad infrastructures, these can be ameliorated by obliging extra taxes and enhancing public transportation.