Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Getting

an

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employment

just after

universisty

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university

is sometimes a tricky thing to do for many

postgraduate

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.

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rising university fees and scarce

employment

prospects has

renforced

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reinforced

the idea that some arts subjects should not

be teach

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such

as, philosophy and history while it would be more profitable to study only practical degree courses that maximise

chance

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of

employment

.

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essay intends to provide arguments against

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last

point of view.

Firstly

, I believe that forced everyone to be in practical degrees would be an attempt to student liberties. Indeed, being talented in a subject and being able to learn

this

deeply as much as we can is the most crucial feeling at

universty

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university

.

For instance

, postgraduate

are

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,all of them, gifted differently, some are

artistics

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artistic

artists

, others more manual or

scientifics

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scientific

.

Moreover

many jobs are possible

such

as

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drawers, painters,

philosoph

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philosophy

philosopher

philosophers

or historian. Indeed, when

someone

is fascinating by a subject, learning hours seems to be normal and a great

vituoso

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virtuoso

might

born

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whereas doing something we do not appreciate is obviously less motivating.

Hence

, being able to learn what topics we want is one of the most important

key

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to be taken in any work.

On the other hand

, no one can be productive and well-being doing something he does not enjoy.

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, when

someone

is compelling in his work, he will be productive and have more chance to get a job than another person

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does not like his work. For

this

reason, even if we are living in a capitalist world where money is described as more essential than anything, I believe that liberty to study is more crucial than any

employment

.

Then

, some study as practical, or technician degree, will probably have as much chance of

employment

than

someone

talented in any other subject.

Hence

,

instead

of trying to get a job,

being extremely satisfy

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of

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what we learn is ,in my point of view, the main goal to achieve. To conclude, I believe that money, and job are often coming anyway, especially when employers see

someone

motivated .

Then

, we all have several purposes in our daily lives.

Finally

, I think that it is extremely important to let people

chosing

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choosing

what they want to do and

who

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they want to be.