Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem such measures cause?

In present-day,
the
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more and more lands are used for providing
meat
production.And it comes to thE result that not enough land for
everthing
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everything
so we have to control
this
rate or better reduce it. And we have to make
a long term solutions
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long term solutions
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to solve
this
problem. And I will show two measures
First
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measures
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is the actual hard one: to encourage everyone to eat more crop production,or to be vegetarian. Making people more interesting
about to
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being a vegetarian or vegan; add some side benefits like decrease the price of
vegetable
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and increase the price of
meat
products will make some changes. But many people find
this
measure difficult and need a long time to be effective The
second
measure is
eat
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something like
meat
products but not from
meat
, like some kind of mushroom and artificial
meat
. But it tastes not really good and
may be
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maybe
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don’t have enough
nutrion
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nutrition
likE
meat
products In conclusion , it
hard
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to reduce
meat
comsumptions
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consumption
consumptions
, we have to change in our mind , learn more about diet or make more things can interested us more than
meat
. But I believe someday it will be done
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