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In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

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It is evident that some
people
 prefer to
work
 harder while others do not push themselves to a limit. The question about the reason why some
people
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hard working
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hardworking
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 and the right balance has always been controversial.
This
 essay will
firstly
 describe reasons why some
people
 are hard-working and
secondly
, discuss why others prefer to spend less time at
work
. On the one hand, there are
people
 who always intended to be hard-working by virtue of several reasons. One of the main reasons is that almost all companies have a competitive environment. Due to
this
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 some employees need to prove that they are worthy
for
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this
 position.
Although
, there is a question about compensation.
For instance
, international conglomerates
such
 as Unilever and other huge companies try to stimulate their personnel with better compensation packages or bonuses at the end of
year
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.
However
, there always
has
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 been
people
 who prefer to be more relaxed than hard-working
people
. Sometimes,
people
 who are stressed at
work
 have various consequences
such
 as health issues, depression and insomnia.
For instance
, a recent report from the Ministry of Labor reveals that more than 80
percent
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 of employees suffer from health issues and various outcomes.
In addition
, having said that, some
people
 prefer to spend time with their families and hobbies rather than spend
all time
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 at
work
, because it has an important emotional impact. To conclude, it is evident that hard
work
 allows
people
 to achieve their career goals and earn more money than other
people
,
however
, it is highly important that society should be aware of various consequences and find the right balance.
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