The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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is still a fairly debatable topic on

people

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using

cash

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or the

credit

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card, though

credit

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cards

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are very new to the

people

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and

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a huge impact on

people

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lifestyle.Not everyone

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is

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equally educated and has knowledge

on

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of

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bank accounts and

credit

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card transactions.

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hand

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people

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working

on

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in

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IT sectors are paid their salary directly to their accounts,the usage of

credit

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cards

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for them are fairly increasing and once they feel safe

of

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apply

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using

credit

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cards

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inseed

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instead

of

cash

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on

hand

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which may even be unsafe for them to carry.But the

people

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who don't get used to

credit

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cards

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still prefer to have

cash

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on

hand

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for all their daily expenses.

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, there is still

people

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in every family brought up as educated kids tend to use

credit

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cards

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for all

their

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transaction they make and still teaches the advantages for their family and so nowadays the trend of using

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card increases day by day.Parents more likely

getting

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to get

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used to

use

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using

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credit

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cards

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having their own bank accounts rather

to

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apply

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carry money for every

occations

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occasion

occasions

.

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,Nowadays almost every

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tend to accept

credit

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cards

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for daily usage and it removes the

consiousness

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consciousness

of carrying

cash

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safely wherever they go.

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outside cities

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we

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have places where there is

non

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non-acceptace

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acceptace

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acceptance

of

credit

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cards

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and still

people

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have situations to debit

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from the ATM's. Yet from my

perseption

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perception

I could conclude on using

credit

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cards

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for the daily activities which

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are

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safest

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the safest

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form of

transcation

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transaction

than by carrying

cash

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for every

occasions

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occasion

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,Correspondingly there are lots of awareness on using

credit

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cards

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nowadays and it would likely to continue for years and probably for

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next generation

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geting

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getting

money in

hand

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would be rare.