The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

As
this
is still a fairly debatable topic on
people
using
cash
or the
credit
card, though
credit
cards
are very new to the
people
and
has
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a huge impact on
people
lifestyle.Not everyone
are
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is
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equally educated and has knowledge
on
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of
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bank accounts and
credit
card transactions.
On the other
hand
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,hand
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people
working
on
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in
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IT sectors are paid their salary directly to their accounts,the usage of
credit
cards
for them are fairly increasing and once they feel safe
of
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apply
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using
credit
cards
inseed
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instead
of
cash
on
hand
which may even be unsafe for them to carry.But the
people
who don't get used to
credit
cards
still prefer to have
cash
on
hand
for all their daily expenses.
Moreover
, there is still
people
in every family brought up as educated kids tend to use
credit
cards
for all
their
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the
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transaction they make and still teaches the advantages for their family and so nowadays the trend of using
credit
card increases day by day.Parents more likely
getting
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to get
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used to
use
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using
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credit
cards
having their own bank accounts rather
to
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apply
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carry money for every
occations
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occasion
occasions
.
In addition
,Nowadays almost every
sectors
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sector
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tend to accept
credit
cards
for daily usage and it removes the
consiousness
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consciousness
of carrying
cash
safely wherever they go.
In contrast
outside cities
still
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we
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have places where there is
non
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non-acceptace
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acceptace
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acceptance
of
credit
cards
and still
people
have situations to debit
cash
from the ATM's. Yet from my
perseption
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perception
I could conclude on using
credit
cards
for the daily activities which
is
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are
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safest
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the safest
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form of
transcation
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transaction
than by carrying
cash
for every
occasions
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occasion
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,Correspondingly there are lots of awareness on using
credit
cards
nowadays and it would likely to continue for years and probably for
next generation
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next-generation
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geting
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getting
money in
hand
would be rare.
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