There is evidence that inhaling cigarette smoke causes health problems not only for smokers but for non-smokers who inhale other people's smoke. In view of this, smoking should be banned in all public places, even though this would restrict some people's freedom of action. What are your views?

In

this

day and age, there is no denying that cigarette

smoke

is harmful to both

smokers

and those who inhale the

smoke

. Many

people

claim that the best solution for

this

problem is to restrict smoking in public areas even though it would be detrimental to the freedom of

smokers

.

However

, I strongly believe that

this

is necessary

in

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of the safety of society.

Firstly

, every living person has their own freedom. If the government enforce a law to ban smoking in communal

places

, many

smokers

will lose benefits. In many countries, there are rarely any separate

places

for smoking. Sometimes

people

smoke

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a cigarette

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cigarette

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just because they want to relieve stress in life.

On the other hand

, smoking in public

places

should be banned all over the world right at the moment. It is clear that passive smoking leads to many serious health problems, even though these

people

are non-

smokers

. Lung cancer, cardiovascular diseases or respiratory problems are regularly caused by secondhand smoking. When a person smokes in

public

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a public

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place

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places

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, the

smoke

will release into the air and into the lungs of other

people

.

This

cause

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serious consequences not only for the smoker but

also

for

people

around. Government should set extremely strict laws to reduce

this

alarming situation.

For instance

, they can

fine

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money or do

criminal

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penalty

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of

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smoking in communal

places

, or building spaces only for

smokers

. In conclusion, the community benefits are still the most important factor. Smoking in public locations should be banned as it strongly affects human’s health.