Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A percentage of the population believe that foreign
people
have to follow all the
customs
of the local place and have exactly the same behaviour.
Otherwise
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believe that it is really important to have
diversity
between the visitors and the locals. On the one hand, they are plenty
countries
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that are totally strict with their local
customs
. It is really important to know
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everything
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every thing
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that tourists
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trend
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to visit in the
country
. Generally, all the touristic places have some rules that are needed to be followed. Local
people
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kind
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human
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race that comes from
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another
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an other
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country
when they feel that there is
a
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respect
all
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their things.
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, visitors are reacquired
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a
behavior
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since they come to the
country
until they leave it. It is important to maintain
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order.
For instance
, Mallorca
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plenty
benefits
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of
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tourism in summer but local individuals are tired of seeing drunk teenagers in all parts. That young persons do not
respect
the beach or the streets.
On the other hand
, one of the things that make rich a
country
is
the
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diversity
.
People
like seeing that they are plenty of nationalities with their customers in a
country
. The
behavior
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is really important to make a peaceful place to live. Is for
this
reason that everyone
have
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to
respect
the other nationalities making part of the foreign
country
that they are living or just visiting for a few days.
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diversity
can bring some good things to the
country
. It is really beautiful that different nationalities can live in the same place, with their
customs
moreover
with their behaviour. To conclude, they are two different perspectives and each one can have benefits.
People
have to follow the rules
stablished
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established
in a
country
. In
this
case, I agree that
people
have to follow the local
customs
,
otherwise
can be a lack of
respect
. In spite of
this
,
diversity
is really important to concern
people
about the importance of accepting all the
nacionalities
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nationalities
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural understanding
  • cultural harmony
  • local customs and behaviours
  • host country's traditions
  • unintentional offense
  • enhance the travel experience
  • cultural fabric
  • inclusive society
  • diverse society
  • global understanding
  • mutual respect
  • respect for local customs
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