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The most essential component of a person's life is his or her time at the workplace, and life turns meaningless once no job satisfaction is obtained. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years around the world, there is a big discussion on job satisfaction. It is difficult for an individual to survive in his current role without self-satisfaction. It may lead to negative
results
 for both parties. In
this
 essay, I will be discussing the reasons why I
am
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agree
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this
 statement before arriving at a conclusion.
Firstly
, every individual spends the majority of their time at the workplace. If you are not able to find a healthy workplace it leads to mental stress and leads
a
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negative impact on
work
 outputs.
For example
, all good
results
 within the organization are achieved by great teamwork. As part of the team not receiving required support from fellow team members will impact these
results
.
On the other hand
, there were set of people who argue as an individual you reach heights. But, in
reality
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 it's too far with individual efforts it won't lead to good
results
. We are supposed to
work
 in a healthy
work
 environment created by the organization. The best example is Apple able to produce a lot of good products with quality teamwork. In conclusion, a healthy
work
 environment requires an individual to lead quality personal and professional life. It is very hard for an individual to
work
 in an unhealthy workplace.
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