Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is said that college students have their own rights to
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useful
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such
as technology and science. From my point of view,
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agree with the
first
statement that even some
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seem not
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necessary
for the future, they should
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by student decision. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in
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. It is clear that when colleges choose the course by themselves, they are
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probably
happy and
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enthusiastic
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the
subject
is difficult. There are many successful kids in any industries which are not
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scientist or engineer can make their own country better
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to improve human being by
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politics.
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various
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decisions
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, pupils can create the nation better and
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beyond
than having only tech and engineering because they have been studying clearly and deeply.
On the other hand
, It is said that some countries lack in technology and computer engineer
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experts
expertises
,
therefore
children need to
study
for the desires of the country. It is undeniable that technology is along with our daily
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life
nowadays,
as a result
, computer scientist and tech engineer are preferred in the society mostly. To have a good
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opportunity
in the future, there are many opinions that university should require
subject
supporting their colleges and social future. In conclusion, both
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for the country needs or one own passion have benefits and drawbacks. In that case,
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personally think that not only students should have their own decision for making them happy while they are studying but
also
this
will make the world more various.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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