When employers choose the best person for a job they should consider personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Hiring people is one kind of
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that a chairman
pay
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his money to some people to work for him. They have to think wisely since they want to pay as
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less
as possible but they still want a good outcome.
That is
why
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of choosing
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place.
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, if the owner of a company is longing for a good person, in
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process, he should consider personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. Qualifications and experience are similar to a
ruler
that cannot read scales. It can only compare the length to the
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, but it can measure nothing. Like that
ruler
, qualifications and experience can describe a person in just some particular perspective. It cannot express or predict how well
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employee works. So, in order to take a real measurement, the chairman should find a new
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having a better
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which is personal qualities.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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